New improved fursona attempt

[KrazyWolf]

Basically i totally redid my fursona and i think its much better than the last one

http://kirakrazywolf.deviantart.com/art/Unfinished-wolf-89709784

Im way happy-er with this one...Except for the fact that i totally ran outa room and forgot a tail with i didnt realize till i was typeing this LOL Fail!! I guess you will just have to use your imagination.  

He is supposed to be holding a gun hopefully i can find some way to fix it...not shure exactly how im gonna do that tho.

[PyroVulpes]

Very nice, although the perspective on the arms looks a little off. His right arm, while farther away, looks larger than the left one. Great job on the head and feet though!

I dunno if you can fix the arms now, but if you draw his tail and hand (on a second piece of paper) in, I'd like to try and "digitally enhance" this one. With your permission, of course.

[Rainbow Wally]

I must say very well done, I agree with Pyro though the arms are a bit off. But hey we all ain't perfect but yeah well done. Nice to see your art pop up again.

[KrazyWolf]

Thanks PyroVulpes and Rainbow Wally
Yea i can see that the arms are off a bit i didnt really notice till you guys mentioned it.

PyroVulpes i dont have any problem with that if you wanna take a shot at it i could draw up the hand and tail for you.

[Lady Serpent]

Neat job, mate.  The muscles are well-defined; you've got muscle lines in just the right places for the most part.  The face has a calm, almost noble expression and there seems to be no problem in the proportions of it.  The fact that you've used a dark, smooth-lining pen really stands out as a positive.

Love the knife, and great job on the detail on that arm and hand.  As mentioned, be careful of matching up proportions when it comes to limbs.  A quick glance as you're drawing should do wonders to prevent it.  (I do it often as well when I'm not paying attention to the 'big picture').

The one thing I would reccomend is watching out for bone structure.  The way his ankles are attaching to the leg, it appears as if the leg should be in a different position.  More noticeable on his left leg (our right side); it almost appears that the knee should be bent upwards more because the ankle is pointing almost straight up, but his leg once it enters the pants doesn't follow that same vertical direction.

I very much dig the flowing hair and the facial expression.  Keep it up, mate!

Cheers,
-Lady Serpent