Too much artwork is never a problem.
The Chase:
Your anatomy seems to be getting much smoother! Great muscle tone on the impala. It's neat how they're feral, yet carry anthropomorphic characteristics. To get a more realistic running feeling for the feline, it might work well to have the legs moving in different positions as they would in nature, so that one is slightly more extended than the other. Just gives it a bit more of an 'in-motion' feel. (eg:
http://www.life.com/image/200351373-001 or
http://www.flickr.com/photos/photochild/33441189/ )
Family Gathering:
Lots going on in this one. Great use of varied colours to bring forward a very positive, bright image. The musculature on the closest chakat's leg is fantastic. Lovely fur shaping on the tails, as well. The small white one's body proportions seem just slightly difficult to imagine correctly; it seems like it would be a tough position to draw a taur in accurately. Is the sleeping one meant to be a non-taur? You've got a lot going here; it seems like a well-imagined scene.
Party:
Some of the anatomy here is fantastic! Asla sitting at the window, as well as your current fursona leaning up on the couch, and the arms and head on Alan are all superbly shaped. The colouring on Starfall's (the cougar chakat)'s shirt is realistic in the way that it's shaded. Lots going on here, as well. You've got a knack for creating busy, interesting indoor scenes. It brings forward the image to me of a place I'd like to be. Great colouring here. I really quite like this one. Matt looks quite jolted out of wherever his head was at to have such a lovely creature grabbing his attention. Is it meant to be surprise on his face?
Asla ref:
The legs and body shape of the anthro forms look good, here. I would suggest that the anthro form looks a little larger than your body type would otherwise suggest! It seems that the extra fur fluff, or just the thicker look of the neck and legs in general, gives the impression of a creature much more heavily-bodied than you may have intended. Lowering the back, raising up the lines where the arm attaches to the body, or lifting the lines of where the belly and chest areas are would all give a bit of a slimmer look to this creature.
Love the back shot (especially the way the legs face), and the swish of that tail.
Alan ref:
Lovely pose on the feral form! I would suggest using slightly less rounded shapes for the muzzle, and allowing it to flow a bit more with some lines leading into the face, to give a more angular, triangle-shaped cat-like head. (For example, this muzzle has a slightly less rounded look. Done by Atomic Soldier; I randomly googled this one and wasn't able to find a good example of /exactly/ what I meant, but this gives something of an idea of how to approach something like a more triangular, cat-like head from a front angle.)
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2009/365/b/2/R__Miira_by_Atomic_Soldier.jpg Again, great tail swish and view of the legs from the back. You may also want to raise the eyes on the anthro head just a bit, to balance out the facial proportions. He's got great markings and a believable colour scheme.
Alanna ref:
There seems to be a theme here. Again, great shaping on those back legs and tail from the back view. Eyebrow angle can portray a lot of expressiveness; she looks quite angry on the left hand side due to the downward-sloping eyebrow. The stripe flows beautifully down the back and onto that tail. You're definitely getting a good handle on certain aspects of anatomy. Taurs, not having adequate equivalents from nature, can be notoriously difficult to draw. You're really doing well with it, in my opinion.
Jungle tails didn't link properly, but I found it in your gallery. This one makes me smile! There always seems to be so many different things going on with your images. The way she's trudging through the water is realistic; it looks like she's struggling to push through. Here's the link:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5398381/This is great stuff, Alanna. It's been lovely looking at some of your newer work. I'd love to see more of it sometime!
If you like the occasional suggestions, I'm more than happy to give them. You've got a lot of good stuff going here, and a lot more potential that seems to be coming to the surface lately. Great to see you back in touch with your artistic side.
Cheers;
-Sephren
