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« on: June 19, 2008, 02:16:10 AM »

Yeah.

Any suggestions? It's been a while. I'm not totally sold on my colour choices yet, so I didn't want to start more detailed shading and stuff until I got a better handle on it.
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« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2008, 07:14:25 PM »

You're leaping over a fence after some good shots, I very much hope.  Perfect pose for a creature such as y'self.

The colour scheme looks good so far; I'd reccomend a dark brown/grey or similar for the hat as white just doesn't jive with the rest of the colour if you were planning on leaving it as such.

The variable line densities look fantastic, especially on the jacket.  Just make sure you get rid of those little red remnants around the fingers at some point so there's no mistaking it for nailpolish.  I very much enjoy the perspective on this piece.

Looking forward to seeing it when it's finished.  : )

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« Reply #2 on: July 11, 2008, 10:48:39 PM »

Danke, mein freund. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
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« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2008, 01:16:23 AM »

I really like the sketch. Cheesy

Nothing much to criticise about really, since I'm not really an "artist" in terms of drawing. The colouring is good too, probably will look even better once you add shading and everything. Only thing is, as Lady Serpent mentioned, that those red dots (blotches?) shouldn't belong unless it was planned. Really good though. XD

Can't wait for it to be done.

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« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2008, 05:21:52 AM »

Nice seeing you toying around with harder perspectives. Great to push the limits that way!
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« Reply #5 on: July 12, 2008, 10:25:07 AM »

Nice linework, good motion.

You should try to do some simple block shading to add depth to the drawing.
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« Reply #6 on: July 12, 2008, 05:44:07 PM »

Temperence: it's in the works. I'm really terrible at shading, so I'm having to work at it quite a bit.

Thanks for all your comments, guys Cheesy
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