Well this book i got the idea about a month and a half ago. So far you've seen the Map. Yan Torinki. It's been slow. Only have put together the first chapter, but I have created 1 of 3 new languages, 6 new Cultures and insets, and have been working out the bugs in the whole plot. No I won't give out to much agian. (*british accent* Spoilers mate, Spoilers
) But it's about a main character that at first, you'll learn to hate, but eventual love. (hopefully)
So here is a little Teaser from Chapter One Days of Confusion. The plane crash scene (this has more Dialogue then discription)
“What the hell is that!?” Jerry screams out, “I don’t know. I’ve never seen anything like it!” Replies an unknown voice, “What’s going on up there Guys?” “Sir, please stay sea...” “What the…? Were the hell are we!?” The plane suddenly darts left, then right sharply. Henry is thrown back into his seat and is almost hit by a teapot from the food cart. “What’s going on? We shouldn’t be near mountains, were did these come from?” “LOOK OUT!!!” Jerry shouts in horror.
A massive jolt rocks the plane to the left and it spins around several times as Henry holds on for dear life. The unknown voice shouts through the deafening sound of warning buzzers “Engine one is OUT! And the right wing is heavily damaged.” They manage to level out the plane and begin to head for an opening through the mountains into clearer skies.
“Come on girl, hold together!” Jerry says with a nervous tone while patting the console.
“Were out of those damn mountains, Look there’s the ocean over to the…” The pause is unsettling. “Look at the compass, were heading south east!”
“That’s not possible Tim; the ocean is to the West if we ended up in the Mountains.” Jerry replies with growing concern.
“Try the radio Jerry, send out a ‘Mayday’, tell them we’ve damage our right wing and engine one is out, and now we are having Instrument failure.”
“On it Tim!” he shouts as he begins tuning the radio. “Mayday! Mayday! Mayday! This is Tango, six, six, niner, Sierra, Bravo, does anyone copy?” Static overcomes the radio.
“I repeat, Mayday! Mayday! Mayday! This is Tango, six, six, niner, Sierra, Bravo, does anyone copy!?” The crackle of static answers back with an eerie silence. All of a sudden a loud horrifying sound booms through the Cabin, more warning sounds go off in the cockpit. As the plane begins fly erratically.
“She’s breaking apart, I’m losin’ control” Tim says while wrestling the wheel.
“Look! Over there, I see a field near a small town.” Jerry then looks back into the cabin through the open door, “Sir, we are going to make an emergency landing, please brace for impacted.” Henry nods back with a look of fear. The smell of the fuel burning is mixed with rubber and plastic as the right wing burns. The smell wafts through the cabin like a flood filling every nook and cranny.
“Tim, do you think that field is hard enough to put the gear down?”
Tim glances over and shakes his head,
“Right then, a belly landing in a small field surrounded by forest with a damaged wing, and one engine. This shouldn’t be too hard then” Jerry says with a bit of sarcasm
Tim looks over, “Ya forgot, it’s also in the middle of nowhere.”
“Ah yes, nice and simple then.” Jerry replies with a smirk across his face.
“We’re coming in to fast Jerry, we have to lose speed or we will hit the trees at the end of the Field.”
“Damn! Flaps won’t budge, hydraulics are out. Cutting engine power to zero” Jerry reaches for the throttle control and pulls it back.
“Not good enough Jerry, we’re still coming in to fast! Let’s try slipping the plane.”
A moment of silence came over the two’s chat. With a look of concern Jerry replies “Alight, ready?”
“Yes… 3, 2, 1, Now!” The plane dips left, and begins to fly almost sideways.
“Com’on Girl…” The Plane jolts left as the left wing clips a Tall tree.
“S***! Hold on, All hell is about to break loose!” Tim Yells
(I censored it just to be nice) But, that is just a bit of chapter 1.
