Editor?

[Niah Foxx]

I've had a lot of time as of late sitting around in places with no net, and some with only generator power.. So I'm looking for someone to edit stories i have, spelling grammer and the like, there not completed, because i jump form one to the other so it takes a bit heh.. and also to critique them and add some constructive and helpfull idea's and such.

[Lady Serpent]

Hey there, mate;

If you post it in relatively short sections, (Say, a chapter at a time), I'd be happy to look over it when I get the chance.  Have you picked over it yourself already first?  (Spellcheck, all that jazz?)  Makes it much easier if the mistakes are only the ones you can't catch yourself already.

Cheers;
-Lady Serpent

[Niah Foxx]

Yes i have spell checked it, and finally put it in paragraphs over a chunk, and im maybe half way though the first chapter, bout 1500 or so words into it, I'm use to role playing and trying to incorporate it into storys to keep me busy.

I actualy dont want to post it anywhere, a few people telling me its crap i can take, a couple dozen, would just make me mad, i dont know how some of the artists on FA and stuff do it hehe, So PM or Email fine?