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« on: October 04, 2009, 09:48:00 AM »

Song from my latest project (not my, like just me. but a group effort)

i roll a zippo across my desk and i
pull down the zipper upon my chest and i
present a beating lump of flesh and I
give it to you straight from my breast and I

t'adore petite lapine, lapine
tu ma vie, petit lapine lapine
je te pense chaque heure heure
tu ma vie petite fleur, mon fleur

All my life its been a habit and i
grow to the ground goddamnit and i
take a step forward then back and i
pulled your heart right out of my lap and i

t'adore petite lapine, lapine
tu ma vie, petit lapine lapine
je te pense chaque heure heure
tu ma vie petite fleur, mon fleur

a jar of pens in my hand and I
give you my reprimends and I
would sacrifice all my friends and I
think that you're just playing pretend and I

t'adore petite lapine, lapine
tu ma vie, petit lapine lapine
je te pense chaque heure heure
tu ma vie petite fleur, mon fleur

je ne suis pas ici avec vous et je
know what I have to do and I
départ suivre mon sentier et je
know what I have to say and I

t'adore tu petite lapine, lapine
tu ma vie, petit lapine lapine
je vous pense chaque heure
tu ma vie petite fleur fleur

Opinions?

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« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2009, 02:22:01 PM »

Love the mixture of french/english.  It's not complex enough french to really throw people off, and it flows nicely alongside the rhythym of everything else.

Plus, of course, rabbits.  Can't say no to that.  <3

Would love to hear it in a song.  The lyrics are fairly obscure at parts; I can't interpret what 'grow to the ground' actually means, but it sounds interesting.

The english/french mix in the final non-chorus line is neat; again, I'd like to hear it in sound to actually get the true feel of the music.

Good stuff.  Glad to see you back around; where are you living these days?

Cheers,
-Sephren
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