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« on: July 06, 2009, 07:16:00 PM »

This is just a poem I wrote for school about a drag race. It also contemplates about the value of life, and how our decisions affect it. That's what I was trying to convey, anyhow. Enjoy!


The Street Race

While cruisin’ downtown late Saturday night,
I met a ’48 Buick who pulled up on the right.
He rolled down his window and yelled, “How ‘bout a drag?”
I said, “You’re on, but I don’t want to brag.

My Deuce Coupe is rumblin’, the engine is purrin’,
And when I get her into fourth, she’ll really be roarin’.”
We lined up at a bright red stoplight,
And I could tell I was in for a fight.

As the light turned green, we started to race,
Down the street we drove at a deadly pace.
Then I heard it, the ear-splitting bang.
I swerved hard to the left and my tires sang.

The Buick was engulfed like Dante’s Inferno,
Flames leaping out of places internal.
I watched in shock as the car exploded,
And the siren of an ambulance, through the air it floated.

I think back to that horror-filled night,
With a corpse of a car still in my sight.
There is still one thought that cuts me like a knife,
Was a race really worth a young man’s life?
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« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2009, 08:43:29 PM »

Echoes of 'Deadman's Curve' by Jan & Dean  Tongue
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« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 09:53:54 AM »

Yeah, I think that was what motivated me to write it in the first place.

Love Jan & Dean's music.
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