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« on: May 16, 2009, 09:05:42 AM »
I Write some poetry from time to time and I like to share it with people even furs  Wink

This first one is some thing i've just written and I would like to know what you think of it.

Poeple often ask me "How do you do?"
I stand there thinking for a moment or two
Then I want to scream "I'm mad about you"
I often hear I look like i'm in love
I then answer I was her by the every first touch
In my heart and in my mind
I know theres one thing to be true
Pinky I'm falling in love with you

I can't post this on the danish furom, since Pinky is a danish fur.
Does it look good?
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« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 12:40:02 PM »
Awwwww, Thats so cute ^^ and you know if you really are in love with that girl you should tell her somtimes things have a way of working out... trust me
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« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 02:56:31 PM »
I was wondering if i should send it as a letter and send it to her so its there when she gets home
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« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2009, 05:32:58 PM »
That would be sweet, I think you should do it.
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« Reply #4 on: May 16, 2009, 05:42:57 PM »
Quote from: Wolfgang on May 16, 2009, 05:32:58 PM
That would be sweet, I think you should do it.
i agree that would be very sweet, if that happento me i would love it and im sure anyone else would.
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« Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 05:07:54 PM »
An update on the love poem, she was very flatern but i could work out, i kinda knew it. And for now we've become closer freinds, so it wasn't all bad.

I got some more poems for you to read if you want to..

                        My Angel
I often sit here
Wondering why
Some one would make you cry
Hurt your innocent sould and I
Hope some day a time would come by
I'll take your han and we..
If I had the chance
I would never let go
You're my angel
I just thoyght you should know

         This one don't have a name. It's a poem I can't finish. I've wrote it to some one who's very close to me.

Never seen anything like you
A heart of fire and a mind so free
That's how I want to be
You're my light so to say
please stay and never fade away
I'm sad and scared
When you are away
Whit you be my side i'm safe

                          Night
A night so dark
Never seen my spark
Your fire burn so bright
It brings joy to my life
Makes me safe
By you is mt right place
A night so lon
No fear just fun
We are playing our game
And i've won a gift of non
I only need you nothing else hun
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